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shiny picture is shiny orz

characters from my own story. maybe i should draw them more often. (have many unfinished sketches lol)

look what have i done to them btw ; i made girls look like boys and vice versa~ lolol ^^; so i'm sorry to confuse you by their gender orz


tools : ps cs2, graphire, sai

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:iconthe-chocoholic-girl:
love this piece :love:
really adore the color and shininess in here. and the drawing looks 'full' with all your character :D that's good.
the composition feels perfect.
and you're top notch on doing the pose!

i would like to give some suggestion on the anatomy :aww:
the green haired boy's face look a little strange. maybe it's just a disposition on the mouth? or maybe it's just me ^^;
but i think it will look better if the chin is moved up a bit.

another one in my opinion, the spell ring on the right hand of the blonde girl doesn't blend well with the surrounding. how should i put it ... it looks as if it's made in a rush.

that's all the suggestion i have in mind. please forgive any offending words or mistakes that i made. keep up the super awesome work!
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:iconnatsukeiki:
Uwaaaa~ I love your colouring style!! :3

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:iconmia-takamory:
Very Shiny!!! I like <3

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:iconsnortiie:
Hehe, the one with the gun amuses me x3
Very nicely coloured ^^

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:iconlaitma:
Huwaaaaaah, how epic!! >w< Beautiful group picture, and I love all the details and coloring's just fantastic~ >w<

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:iconkobakoba:
I love your composition =v=

Your characters are really cute!

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:iconhinagi-san:
kerennya~~!!! @w@

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:iconrinnkruskov:
pewarnaanya tambah rappppih!!! XD

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:iconneko-chiba:
Really amazing work!

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:iconcarthegian:
bagusnyaa.. suka bgt sama style coloringnya =D

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